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Vicky
LIttle Additude...


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Author: Before you think anything at all...this will not take forever to update. ;D In fact it will be updated daily. Mainly because I'm in a contest against Kelly. ^^; This story focus a lot on Donatello.
Disclaimer: I do not own the TMNT.
Summary: Donatello invents a time machine. But unfortunately something happens, causing Donnie, Zoey, and Linda to go back in time.
Chapter one: Miscalculation's
The sky grew far darker over head. As thunder clouds invaded the clear Sky's of, New York City. Fifteen year old, Kelly sighed as darkness slowly intervened in her life once again. She stood on top of a sky scrapper, perched on its point. With a look of depression setting upon her face. The darkness with in her was nearly on the verge of con-sealing her vary soul completely. But she didn't care and gave up fighting it along time ago It just seemed hopeless. Sure she despised all evil, yet she was coming the vary thing she despised the most. Her honor, loyalty, and kindness was being torn from her vary soul. Being replaced with mistrust, staidness and a attitude that tasted vary bitter.
"Why now." Kelly mumbled angrily, glaring at the sky. A clash of thunder was heard, startling Kelly. It caused her to lose her contrition and fall off the vary tip she was once on.
'I guess this it.' Kelly though, as she was falling. On her way down she grabbed into a close line, causing the thing to snap and breaking her fall some what. Kelly groaned in pain, as she slowly stood up and got on her feet. A sudden chill went down her spine, as cool crisp air blown past her face. Kelly felt a dark presence near by. Glancing around nervously do to her uneasiness. A eager feeling to get the heck out of the allie way was passing trough her body, yet her mind told her otherwise. Frozen in fear from what was coming her way, she just waited. Some one or something, approached her, wearing a dark black cloak.
"Ah........" It hissed with excitement in its voice. ".....now sleep." It's eyes glown a bright red and Kelly passed out, collapsing on the ground.
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3 hours later
"Have you seen Kelly, fearless leader?" Raph asked, growling lowly. You could hear the irritation, and fustration in his voice. He walked closer over to the dijo, where Leo was practicing katas.
"No." Leo responded, in a normal tone of voice. "Why?" He asked, stopping his katas practice for a second and looking over at Raph, worriedly.
Raph gritted his teeth and growled lowly. "I got a few words to say to her." Raph said, before storming off.
Leo sighed, shaking his head. 'Kelly.....what did you do now?' Leo though, before going back to his katas, practice.
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Meanwhile.......
"Hey, Donnie what have you been working on, lately?" Linda asked, with puppy eyes. She leaned over, Dons, right shoulder, to take it a look at it. She stared oddly at the new device her brother was working on.
"Well...what is it?" She pleaded, annoyingly.
Donnie sighed. "If I tell you, will you stop breathing over my shoulder? I can't work like this." Don said.
"Alright, fine. So....what is it?" Linda asked, with excitement in her eyes.
"Well....." Donnie started. "....a part of a time menchine. Kinda like the remote." He responded.
Zoey entered the room, with a box ful of junk emraced in her arms. "I found what you been looking for at the junk yard." Zoey said, quietly, holding up the box.
"Thanks, Zoe." Don said, reaching into the box and grabbing a certain device, he needed. He connected it into the remote. "There....now it's almost finished." He mumbled, quietly to him self.
"Cool........." Linda said, leaning over his shoulder and pushing one of the buttons.
"No...wait, Linda." Donnie said, but it was to late, a flash of light lit up the room for a second and the three turtles disappeared along with the device.
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Great first chap. I loved it.
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Vicky
LIttle Additude...


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Thanks, I'm glad you did.
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You and me both. I'm not a flammer so you don't havta worry about me hating it.
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Vicky
LIttle Additude...


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(Warning: If your a big time, Don fan, you might not wanna read this chapter. Than again things only grow darker as the story continues. So if your afraid back down now. Vary exciting yet, a bit gory. If you happen to be under 13 I highly recommend you not reading much more of this if you already read the first chapter. You might tempted to trough. ;) Enjoy, and please review peoples. )
Chapter two: The medieval days.
"You were gonna tell me not touch that, right?" Linda said, in unseen.
Don sighed. "Yeah."
Linda looked around, blinking several times."What just happened, anyways?" She asked. There was grassy plains, everywhere, that probably went on for miles.
"Well...." Donnie started. "...when you tripped one of the triggers to the time machines remote, a ray like signal was sent to it's host. Causing are molecules to wosh through the time machine, it's self." He said, simply. "The only problem being is...." He paused, not exactly sure how to say it to, his little sisters.
"Is what, Don?" Linda asked, looking up at him worriedly.
He sighed deeply. "Theres a high possibility we can't go back, to are regular time period."
"Couldn't you just push a fast forward button or something on the remote?" Linda asked.
"No.......I hadn't finished all the motivations on it yet. Theres no way it can signal the time machine since it doesn't exist yet." Donnie said.
Linda blinked a couple of times, not taking this all in vary well. For once she was lost for words.
"Great......thanks a lot, Linda. Now we won't be able to return home." Zoey mumbled, quietly.
Linda heard the sarcasm in her voice, on the first sentence. "Well, sorry.....how was I so post to no this was gonna happen?" She asked, glaring at the white claded turtle.
"You at least should of had, the common curtiousy not to touch it!" Zoey snapped.
"Well.....I said, I'm sorry." Linda said, crossing her arms and turning way from, Zoey.
It was quite for awhile as, the turtles, observed, there area.
Finally some one spoke. "So now what?" Zoey asked, breaking the silence and, looking up at Don.
"First I think we need to find some kind of civilization to stay, at. Than we might be able to figure this out, by putting are heads together." Donnie said.
"Does that include mine?" Linda asked, with excitement.
"Yes and no." Donnie said, putting his hand over his chin, obviously, trying to figure something out.
Linda raised a eye ridge, looking rather confused. "I'm gonna go with the yes." She said, after a long moment of silence. She looked up at the sky, as it grew far darker, every second. "Well at least the time of day is about the same." She said, out of the blue with a grin.
"Yeah..but how come the sky's clear as day? Wasn't there a thunder storm." Zoey asked, looking up at the sky.
"Maybe that storm, doesn't exist yet." Linda said, jokingly.
Don just shacked his head.
"I guess we better get going, it's getting late and were out in the middle of no where." Donnie said. "The only problem is, I don't think will find shelter or anywhere all that convertible to sleep."
"Or warm for that matter." Linda stated. "And where cold blooded, is that gonna be a problem?"
"What you think? It's November." Zoey said, simply.
"So then we will freeze!?" Linda asked, worriedly.
"Hmm......maybe." Zoey said, quietly.
"Oh...no, where all gonna die." Linda said, falling onto her knees, and than landing softly on the grass onto her plastern.
Donatello was quit for a long period of time, just watching his sisters. ' What are we gonna do? I'm no Leo....' Don though, worriedly over the whole concept.
"Hey, Donnie, are you alright?" Zoey asked, seeing the worry and anxiety written all over his face.
He sighed deeply"Yeah...." Donnie responded quietly. "Come on let's go." He started, walking. Don was Slowly increasing his speed until he was running, rather fast. His little sisters fallowed, but quickened there paste from the start.
4 hours later
The sky was completely dark now, yet Donatello and his sisters still continued, using the moon and stars as there source to see anything.
"This is getting pointless." Linda complained. "Not to mention the fact I can barley see anything, my legs are killing me and I hadn't eaten anything for like six hours." She added.
"None of us, had." Zoey said, quietly, before she stopped running.
"I no...and theres nothing, but grass and more grass." Linda said, coming to stop as well, and landing softly on her knees. "And that weird, extremely sharp pointy black rock." She added, after spotting it. It had a whole bunch of vary sharp pointed edges at the front and back of it, yet it was extremely smooth on the left and right and top sides of it.
Don looked at, the rock oddly for a moment, before running over to it. "Wow......I never seen anything like it." He said, rather fascinated He rubbed one of his fingers up against one of the points gently. "OW!" He said, pulling his hand back. His finger was bleeding badly like it was cut from a vary sharp sword, or naive. Then he dragged his other hand across it's right side, feeling the smoothness. It was as soft as a pillow, yet smoother than a turtles shell that was waxed daily. He turned to, Zoey and Linda and finally spoke up.
"I guess will rest for the night." Donatello said, sighing. He sat down, leaning up against the right side of the rock.
Both the younger turtles nodded, and layed down on grass. With in a few minutes they were, sound asleep. But unfortunately, it wasn't as easy for Donatello. He couldn't erase the dreadful thought's in his head, that seemed to repeat endlessly.
'I can't do this. What if I fail? Then will all be trapped here and my sisters will never for give me. Not to mention the fact I'm no, Leo....not even close, yet they still look up to me, only to get disappointed in the vary end of this all. What was I saying before anyways....it was nearly impossible. But I can't let them down.....' He though. He continued tossing and turning into he got completely exhausted and finally fell asleep.
Three hours later he was groaning and mumbling things, in his slumber.
"No......get way from them!" Don said.
Suddenly loud foot steps were heard, coming there direction. Dons eyes opened slowly and looked around.
'What is that?' Don though, getting up from his spot and looking around in the darkness, nervously. A chilly breeze endlessly blown the grass towards the turtles direction.
Donatello walked over to his sisters, nudging them to wake up.
"Linda, Zoey! Wake up somethings coming!" Donatello said, loudly.
"Huh, what is it?" Linda said, opening her eyes slowly and looking up at, Don.
Zoey looked up at Don as well, with confusion in her eyes. "The sun is'nt even up yet, what are you doing, Donnie?" Zoey asked, looking up at him tiredly.
"Somethings coming." Don said, unable to hide the worry in his voice. "We gotta get out of here, quick."
Suddenly the chilly breeze stopped, and the three turtles looked around nervously. Don, Zoe, and Lin, looked up at the enormous creature, that stopped in it's tracks. It's was granitic concealed in shadows, from the darkness all around them so they could barley see it except for it's, dreadful, evil, demotic eyes, that was bond to make any child cry, and quiver in fear. Linda looked up at, the creature, fearfully, with tears in her eyes. She was on the verge of crying.
"Don......what is that thing?" Linda asked, nervously.
"Yeah what is it?" Zoey said, having the vary same reaction as, her sister.
Donatello saw the fear in his little sisters eyes and looked up at the creature, with anger in his. He growled lowly at it. "It looks like some kind of demon." He said, seriously. "You guys gotta get out of here quick." Don said, tossing the remote that was in his belt to, Zoey.
Zoey cot the remote and slipped it into her belt, with out the creatures notice. "But, Don, what about you?" Zoey said, with fear in her voice, and eyes.
"Yeah...what makes you think were leaving you with that thing?" Linda said, looking at him, with fear in her eyes as well.
"Just get the shell out of here! I'll try and hold it off!" Don said, sternly. "Don't worry about me!" He turned around and glared at the creature, moving his right hand slowly towards his staff.
Zoey and Linda tried to run but they couldn't. Both turtles had a eager feeling from there body to get the shell out of there yet, there minds seemed to tell them otherwise. Deeply frozen in fear none of them moved a inch.
"Ha, ha, ha!" It laughed evilly. It's eyes stared down, at, Donatello.
He backed up a bit, drawing his BO staff, for defense.
"Foolish mortal, no twig will save you." It said darkly. A large skeleton like hand reached down, out of the darkness grasping Donatello's staff, tightly.
Donnie growled, lowly as he tried to fight back, pulling with all his strength to get the BO out of the creatures grasp. It lifted up, the BO staff along with, Donatello, and swung him around all directions, with tense speed, trying to get him off the BO.
"What you want?!" Don demanded, holding onto the BO staff for his dear life.
"The time machines remote. Give it to me!" It said, darker, then ever.
"So you can terrorize the future?! I don't think so!" Don said, glaring at the creature.
"Vary well, then you have chosen your fate!" It said, sternly. It increased its speed making it far more tense for Don to hold onto. Until finally Don lost his grip slipping off the staff, and flying right into the pointed edges of the weird shaped, black rock.
"Ah!" Don cried out in pain as, it's sharp like edges dug all the way trough his arms. Blood sprayed everywhere.
"Donnie! NO!" Zoey said, falling to her knees. Her eyes broke out into many tears. She was scared.....scarder then she ever had been, in her life. In fact, nothing ever came this close. She stared at her brother in disbelief shaking her head several times as tears fled from them. It begain to rain, harder, and harder, every passing second, as she tried to shake all this away but it wouldn't, go away.
Linda just looked at, Don deeply horrified. On the verge of crying any second. But she tried to say Strong, turning around and glaring at the creature.
'I'm sorry, guys. That I failed.' Don though, before passing out, due to a loss of a lot of blood.
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"Don.......wake up? Are you alright? Don!" Linda said.
Donatello's eyes slowly. He was breathing heavily, as, sweat dripped off his face. He whipped his four head, riding it of some sweat, with one of his shaky hands.
'Was that all just a dream? But it seemed, to real.....' Don though, worriedly.
"Are you okay, Don?" Zoey asked, looking at him worriedly.
Don sighed deeply. "Yeah, I'm fine." He said, trying to remain carm. He glared at the rock, with anger in his eyes. Noticing he was only laying on one of it's soft parts.
"ha, ha, ha!" He heard.
Don looked around nervously but saw nothing.
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Oh so it that it huh?...Well then I am posting my chaper... (s) as well!
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and I spelled chapter wrong..great
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Chapter three: Wonders
Once again the evil laugh was heard, before, Don got up. He looked around once more, only to get blinded by the suns bright rays. It was just making it's way over the peak in between two mountains way off in the distance. His thoughts replaying every moment from his nightmare he recently just had. He stared off into space practly reliving it, several times, as he watched his two little sisters bicker over something.
Linda's stomach growled loudly. "I don't think I can go on like this." Linda complained.
Zoey rolled her eyes. "Oh please, you'll be fine. So far we only missed two meals."
"Only!" Linda snapped. "Were gonna die due to this dreadful toucher."
"Slow down..." Zoey quietly. "Before you end up giving your self a heart attack, over nothing. Were not gonna die. First off, and second, starvation takes days before actually happening."
"How can I? These fields seem to go on for miles. We don't even got water." Linda said, crossing arms.
"I do. Your forgetting something arnt you?" Zoey said.
"I am? What is it?" Linda asked, blinking.
"Well since you have forgotten for the time being....I can make water. Considering it's my element." Zoey said.
"Oh yeah.......I'm a bit slow in the morning." Linda said, blinking. She scratched the top off her bold head, for a second, than cupped her hands. "Please, my mouths never been so dry. In fact I think it's dryer than any existed dessert." She said.
Zoey took in a deep breath and walked closer over to, Linda. She made certain hand sighs, before some water came shooting out of her fingers into, Linda's cupped hands.
Linda drinked all the water, like nothing. "Damn, you make mad good water. You gotta teach me how to do that sometime. It's just unfair how I can't do it." Linda said.
"I'm afraid it's imposable in less you were, born with it." Zoey said.
Linda was quite for awhile, thinking over the whole concepts of it all. "Yeah well....that only makes even more unfair."
Zoey sighed and looked over at Donatello. He appeared to be outta off it. Like out in some type of daze or something.
"Don." Zoey said. He didn't answer her. "Donatello!" She said, far louder than before, but he still say a word.
Linda looked over, at, Zoe and Don. "Thats not how you do it Missy." Linda said, walking closer over to don. "Donnie!" She shouted at the top of her lungs right in front of his face, while waving one of her hands in front of his face. But still nothing...from him.
"Um...Zoe...is he okay?" Linda asked, nervously. "He didn't even flinch, or blink and I was waving my hand in front of his face."
"I noticed, I'm not blind, Lin." Zoey said, walked closer over to Don. "He appears to be in some kind of trance."
"How we snap him out of it?" Linda asked.
"Water should do the trick." Zoey said, before shooting a bunch of water out of her hands. Unfortunately it was a little to much. She ended up blasting with it, causing him to fall back words onto that rock, he was standing in front of.
Don shacked his head a bit and glared at Zoey.
"What was that for?!" Don asked.
"Heh....opps." Zoey mumbled, quietly. "You were in some kind of trance and I needed to snap you out of it. The problem is, I some over did it with the water." Zoey said, looking at her hands shamly.
Don got up and walked over to, Zoey and put a hand over her shoulder. "It's okay, don't worry about it. I kinda lost it for awhile."
"Yeah and she found it." Linda said, with a sheepish grin.
Don just smiled, when hearing his other little sisters remark. "Come on lets go."
"Alright, sounds good with me." Linda said, as she starting walking. Don and Zoe did the same.
After about, five minutes, of walking across the grassy plains, Linda spoke up.
"I just had a random though." Linda announced, loudly as possible.
Zoey just rolled her eyes.
"Couldn't we just call the others with are shell cells?" Linda asked.
"No.....it won't work. They don't exist yet." Don stated firmly.
"Neither should we be in this time period" Zoey added. "But because of you...."
"Yeah, yeah I no. Just end that already." Linda said. "But do you there worrying about us, back in 2006?" She asked.
Don sighed. "Yeah......there all probably wondering about are sudden disappearance, by now."
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Mikey entered the main part of the lair with a expression, off worry on his face. He saw Raph, beating his punching bag to a bloody pullp.....that is if it had blood.
"Hey, Raph, have, you, seen Don, Zoe, Lin, and Kel by any chance? There no where to been seen." Mikey said.
"For starters, don't even mention, Kelly, and second....no." Raph said.
"Sure shes been a jerk and all...but she still are sister." Mikey said.
"Yeah...and, that doesn't mean I have to like her." Raph mumbled, grumpily, before punching a whole through the punching bag. he growled, lowly when sand started, poring out of
"Maybe, Don, Zoey, and Linda..." Mikey said, randomly. "...and, Kelly, joined the dark side." He added, saying the last part darkly.
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There was a enormous hill up ahead.
"It's about time." Linda said. "I was getting sick of seeing the flat, lands."
"Flat lands?" Zoey said raising a eye ridge. "You mean plains."
"Yeah, sure what ever." Linda said, before running off. "I'll race you guys to the top." She shouted.
"Fine, you ask for it." Don said, he started running.
"Yeah." Zoey said, she started running as well.
Linda slowed down, once she was on the top of the hill, finally coming to a stop. "Ha, in your faces." She said, before looking down. She spotted tons of buildings and a white castle over on top of top of a bit of a smaller hill than the one she was standing on.
"Wow..." She whispered quietly and in unseen.
"Only because you got a earlier start than us." Don said.
"Yeah, thats why your such a cheep scape. Now will never hear the end of it, Don." Zoey said.
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Loved both chapters girl.
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Thanks, I'll be updatting today since I finally got some more time on my hands to type the next chapter on my computer. The whole storys finshed, it just needs to be typed and looked over. Over all it came up to 15 chapters long, but I might end up adding more onto these things since there still missing somthing or a lot of somthings. But eather way it's one long flic and the first one I ever finshed. Sorry that I didn't have time to update before. ><
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